Drabble

[sciencegeek]

Title: Untitled thus far. My sister suggested "Just a Whore", though
Author: Fairly obvious, but sciencegeek
Pairing: HP/DM
Rating: PG-13, or whatever the hell it's called now.
Word Count: 158, so says Microsoft Word
Disclaimer: This is not endorsed by Rowling, her publishers or the WB. I do not own these characters, I just write about them.
Author's note: Inspired by the prompt for this week's Amazing Weekly Drabble Thingy (AWDT) "Can't get it out of my head", and written at about 2:30 am. It hasn't really been beta'd so all spelling and grammatical errors are my own. Also, I should probably give a huge thank you to jamie2109 who said this wasn't as bad as I thought it was, and that I ought to post it, otherwise, it would probably be in the trash on the piece of loose-leaf I originally wrote it on. NOTE: This is post-Hogwarts era (that is, they're all grown up)

Feedback, concrit, comments etc are welcome, but, I'd prefer it if you don't flame me, but I doubt that me asking for you not to will really stop you if you are inclined to do so.


Draco allows himself to believe that the hate he sees in Harry’s eyes is not for him, but directed at Harry himself. That Harry hates himself for returning to Draco, week after week. He allows himself to believe that while Harry thinks he’s humiliating Draco, it’s actually the other way around. After all, he’s not the one that’s paying for sex. He’s not the one that’s completely undone by his enemy. He allows himself to believe that Harry tries to be quiet, that Harry bites his lip because he’s trying to keep from moaning his name when they fuck. He allows himself to believe that he has the upper hand and that he could go to the press any day and reveal all of Harry’s dirty secrets and Harry would be shunned, just like he was. He can’t stop believing this, can’t let it out of his head, otherwise he’d see himself as Harry does. Just a whore.

Comments

[maeglinyedi.livejournal.com]

That is a lovely drabble! I love the repetition in the sentences. You should write more often! :-)

[sciencegeek.livejournal.com]

Aw, thank you! Hopefully the next time I have the urge to write, it won't be when I'm trying to sleep.

[jamie2109.livejournal.com]

Haha I told you I really liked it and I do. I like the title too and whore!Draco fics/drabbles are very sexy. Harry is a dick. *nods* I love that Draco cares enough to hold onto something that will stop him losing all self respect. Its really well done. :D

Great job and I demand that you keep writing. lol.

[sciencegeek.livejournal.com]

Heh, thanks! *snugs*
I demand that you keep writing
Gah! You people and your demands. We'll see.

[sciencegeek.livejournal.com]

Oh! On the whore!Draco thing.
Have you read this?

[earth-magic.livejournal.com]

Loved the little drabble. Can I just say I made the mistake of clicking your link and have just spent the last four hours reading the story.

[sciencegeek.livejournal.com]

Thanks for reading!

[sciencegeek.livejournal.com]

Ok, I swear this'll be my last response. Just to warn you, the fic linked in the last comment hasn't been brit-picked. At least, I don't think so. It's. Hm. I read this close to the beginning of my foray into HP fiction, and...it's hard to explain. There are parts of it that bother me because they seem unpolished and aren't to the level of fic I'm used to, now (to be blunt).

[lusiology.livejournal.com]

Sorry for butting in but have you read Just This by Blue? It is similar in parts, but was written before Animus and has a more complicated plot - all in all a well-written and satisfying fic.

[sciencegeek.livejournal.com]

I've heard of it, but I don't think I've read it. Link?

[lusiology.livejournal.com]

Here's the link. I hpe you enjoy it.

http://www.hedwigspost.com/Authors/Blue/JustThis/Chapter00.htm

[skuf.livejournal.com]

Ow. Very nice! (Ow.)

[sciencegeek.livejournal.com]

Um, thanks!

[skuf.livejournal.com]

But it hurt! (Unless I was supposed to laugh, it's a good thing.)

[sciencegeek.livejournal.com]

I'm sorry it hurt, hun. I actually was going to write a whole entry about how I generally prefer more fluffy things, and I go and write about rentboy!Draco being fucked by Harry.

[sugareey.livejournal.com]

ooooo. me likey. =D

*blushes*

[sciencegeek.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you liked it!

[kinky-kneazle.livejournal.com]

Really good, in that "Oh-poor-Draco-let-me-hold-him-till-it's-all-better" kinda way. Draco almost comes across as the stronger character. After all, Harry is going along to humiliate his enemy by paying for sex on a regular basis (at least that's how I read it).

In my own little fluff world, I will believe that Draco is right, Harry does love him, and just can't admit it *g*

[sciencegeek.livejournal.com]

Heh, thanks for reading!
It's kind of odd, because I prefer to read fluff over angsty-serious-sad things, and the first thing I write...isn't fluff.

[kinky-kneazle.livejournal.com]

I was the same with AWDT - every plot bunny was angst, and I'm no angst writer. I'm back in fluff/smut mode now though, and the angst bunnies do not bother me. Looking forward to seeing more of you work.

[sesptwd.livejournal.com]

Oooh, mee likes rentboy!Draco.

You should join my double drabble comm. toilntrouble. It's for 200 word drabbles (hence the term 'double' drabble)

[sciencegeek.livejournal.com]

Thanks for reading! I'll join, but I'm not sure how much I'll post, though.

[oboros.livejournal.com]

ow. very good. but woe.

[sciencegeek.livejournal.com]

Thanks for reading!

[anansay.livejournal.com]

I love these little pieces that delve so deeply into a characters psyche with so few words. It really is a conundrum when dealing with the confusing aspects of sex and money and I think that's exactly what would go through Draco's head should he ever find himself in that situation--that ethereal balance of power and control.

Good.

[sciencegeek.livejournal.com]

Thanks for reading! Sometimes I think that once I get used to writing I may expand on it, but I'm not sure I'd be able to do it justice.

[lusiology.livejournal.com]

Bravo. So much said in so few words and the last 2 lines really bring home Draco's lonely existence. Three cheers for Malfoy pride.

[sciencegeek.livejournal.com]

Thanks for reading this!
*hugs*

[drusillas-rain.livejournal.com]

so sad...

[sciencegeek.livejournal.com]

Aww...I know. Unfortunately, it's what my head needed to get out, before it would let me sleep.

[ihave4ligaments.livejournal.com]

wow. i like it! you should keep writting.

[sciencegeek.livejournal.com]

Thanks for reading!