Drabble

[sciencegeek]

Title: Untitled thus far. My sister suggested "Just a Whore", though
Author: Fairly obvious, but sciencegeek
Pairing: HP/DM
Rating: PG-13, or whatever the hell it's called now.
Word Count: 158, so says Microsoft Word
Disclaimer: This is not endorsed by Rowling, her publishers or the WB. I do not own these characters, I just write about them.
Author's note: Inspired by the prompt for this week's Amazing Weekly Drabble Thingy (AWDT) "Can't get it out of my head", and written at about 2:30 am. It hasn't really been beta'd so all spelling and grammatical errors are my own. Also, I should probably give a huge thank you to jamie2109 who said this wasn't as bad as I thought it was, and that I ought to post it, otherwise, it would probably be in the trash on the piece of loose-leaf I originally wrote it on. NOTE: This is post-Hogwarts era (that is, they're all grown up)

Feedback, concrit, comments etc are welcome, but, I'd prefer it if you don't flame me, but I doubt that me asking for you not to will really stop you if you are inclined to do so.


Draco allows himself to believe that the hate he sees in Harry’s eyes is not for him, but directed at Harry himself. That Harry hates himself for returning to Draco, week after week. He allows himself to believe that while Harry thinks he’s humiliating Draco, it’s actually the other way around. After all, he’s not the one that’s paying for sex. He’s not the one that’s completely undone by his enemy. He allows himself to believe that Harry tries to be quiet, that Harry bites his lip because he’s trying to keep from moaning his name when they fuck. He allows himself to believe that he has the upper hand and that he could go to the press any day and reveal all of Harry’s dirty secrets and Harry would be shunned, just like he was. He can’t stop believing this, can’t let it out of his head, otherwise he’d see himself as Harry does. Just a whore.

Comments

[maeglinyedi.livejournal.com]

That is a lovely drabble! I love the repetition in the sentences. You should write more often! :-)

[jamie2109.livejournal.com]

Haha I told you I really liked it and I do. I like the title too and whore!Draco fics/drabbles are very sexy. Harry is a dick. *nods* I love that Draco cares enough to hold onto something that will stop him losing all self respect. Its really well done. :D

Great job and I demand that you keep writing. lol.

[skuf.livejournal.com]

Ow. Very nice! (Ow.)

[sugareey.livejournal.com]

ooooo. me likey. =D

[kinky-kneazle.livejournal.com]

Really good, in that "Oh-poor-Draco-let-me-hold-him-till-it's-all-better" kinda way. Draco almost comes across as the stronger character. After all, Harry is going along to humiliate his enemy by paying for sex on a regular basis (at least that's how I read it).

In my own little fluff world, I will believe that Draco is right, Harry does love him, and just can't admit it *g*

[sesptwd.livejournal.com]

Oooh, mee likes rentboy!Draco.

You should join my double drabble comm. toilntrouble. It's for 200 word drabbles (hence the term 'double' drabble)

[oboros.livejournal.com]

ow. very good. but woe.

[anansay.livejournal.com]

I love these little pieces that delve so deeply into a characters psyche with so few words. It really is a conundrum when dealing with the confusing aspects of sex and money and I think that's exactly what would go through Draco's head should he ever find himself in that situation--that ethereal balance of power and control.

Good.

[lusiology.livejournal.com]

Bravo. So much said in so few words and the last 2 lines really bring home Draco's lonely existence. Three cheers for Malfoy pride.

[drusillas-rain.livejournal.com]

so sad...

[ihave4ligaments.livejournal.com]

wow. i like it! you should keep writting.